by homealone_447
Will have to change it's name. Great idea and great story... Thanks
This story feels a little rushed, which is fine, but I personally would've preferred a less typical villain. The sex is always great, and I like the mind control aspect. Overall a good story, just not one of your best. I will say that you are one of my favorite authors on this site, in fact you're one of the reasons I began writing in the first place. If you ever have the time check out my stories, I'd love to hear what you think of them.
I'm a huge reader of your stories and 90 % of the time I love the story line and hoping you do another chapter. However, this time I did not get interested into the story until about part way through. Please understand I still loved the story but, not as much as most of the others. Would love to see what you would write from the end of this one into another chapter.
I have read tons of your stories all day and damn I’m in love you really know what ladies want