All Comments on 'College Change'

Needs some editing. Feels kind of random and disconnected. I’d also suggest moving away from the ‘script’ style dialog.

Fuck, fuck, fuck, fuck, fuck.....BIG WINK!

Could anyone follow this story !??

So no one else heard or saw that woman get hit by a car in the middle of the day? Also that happens so late in the story it doesn't explain why a bunch of girls are randomly trying to jump his bones unless thats just normal for him. This seems so disconnected.

The story looks like it has the potential to be something, but it feels so disjointed and rushed it leaves much to be desired. I suggest you find an editor.

I am completely lost since there is no backstory or anything else that explains any of this. It is quite amusing and I enjoyed the read but I had to go back and look to see if I might have missed chapter 1 but since this is the first story posted by you, I don’t see how I could have missed it. I look forward to the next chapter which I hope there will be and I hope it explains some things. Still a fun read though.