All Comments on 'College Clinic Doctor'

THis was a hot story- I need to find a real Doctor like this!

One of the best Doctor/Nurse stories on the net!!

Only the glove treatment at the end could have been a bit longer.

Please go on creating that superb sceneries!!

Super writing, very, very hot doctor.... more please!

More male athletes need exams!

Thanks

This is one of the hottest stories I've seen on Lit in years!

This is just plain excellent!

I loved it!

This is just plain excellent!

I loved it!

Another incredibly hot,very well written,female to male pegging story. Please write many more.

I love the scenario and the play, but find that there's too much justification and too many protocls described. it's good that your characters are so developed, but you should imply their reasoning through their actions or dialogues, rather than telling it. it comes down to that one idea; show, don't tell.

¡ keep up the good work ! I look forward to more of the same genre

nice story, very hot, but u changed the names a couple times it was Jonas/Jason and then there was Dr.Green/ Dr.Johnson.

You are so fucking nasty, I love it. I like the mix between the professional women and the slutty bitch inside her. Oh don't worry I'm not forgetting fem dom foundation. And of course all wrapped up in a high end intelligent woman. I love it all found the psychological part to be even more of a turn-on then the physical. Nice work, could have used a step down in your ending. It just stopped. I'll be reading the next story from you soon. Thanks.

I liked it. But i never did like the whole "make him emasculated to the female part", why cant the girl just enjoy it without playing into the whole femdom thing. But thats just me, i like erotica that has both male and female on equal playing fields and sharing control of sex with both feeling no sense of being a sub or dom.

dont get me wrong, i like the sub and dom erotica stories but i would like to see the role reversal (strap on) showing the man is still seen as masculine and no less of a man for enjoying anal play (which you did do, with julie telling him he was "masculine, etc...", but then the tone of the women slowly turned into making him the sub near the end; and the doctor saying "show him whos getting fucked this time". .... But thats just how i would like to see the tone be in at least one of these anal stories, but you did a good job with it. This seemed a lot closer to the tone i was looking for.

..... overall, i liked this story. I hope you write more.

Perfect story. The amount of femdom was just right for my taste: Jonas gets to enjoy the psychological feeling of being a little bitch, but Julie assures Jonas that he's still her man; and he gets to cum in a big way, awesome that it's the doc jacking him off. The story's approach to using a strapon is very similar to the naughty games I played with a now ex girlfriend a couple of years ago. Five out of five!

Great story - this is exactly the sort of thing I try to write myself; femdom and pegging but in a respectful and loving relationship. Loved the medical angle.

5* and favourited!

5*****

The only ending the Doc found was the loss of her license and jail. What a crock.

Excellent story, and good writing. But was it Dr Greene? Or Dr. Johnson?

Hot!

I wish i had known her as a doctor when I was at uni

Damn this is good.

Great story and writing. Nobody does pegging erotica as well as you. One observation though is at the beginning of the story the Dr. was concerned that Julie was being coerced or pressured into sexual acts just because her boyfriend might want it. That was a bad thing but then both women take that exact attitude when doing this to the bf. Seems a bit hypocritical. Other than that good story.

Feminist crap, insinuating women get pressured into something then commiting a act of rape. of course the good Doctor gets reported, struck off and faces charges

Just loved it. nice work.

"We had agreed that Jonas was the only one who was going to be naked during my assistance with his initiation."

But did she really do him while wearing her clothes?

Excellent, far more than 5 Stars. Double Date with Eric and Jonas getting pegged side by side? LOL

Jesus - I came SO hard reading this - and it was all I could do to make it to the end without exploding too soon. AMAZING writing and an AMAZING, hot, erotic story!