by FantasyLurker
Good premise.
But the handjobs start too abruptly. Needed more in the way of preliminaries. Needed the girls describing how wonderful their tits were. And asking him when was the last time he came.
Too short.
Needed more in the way of describing the handjobs they were going to give him before they started.
Needed more details of how they executed the handjob.
Needed dialog during the handjob.
Needed a bit of edging, not letting him cum too fast so the cum he produced would be more.
Four stars.