by sb69
God, that WAS HOT. Write more.
Maybe Mrs Jared and Mrs Peterson could meet Jareds advisor or one of his teachers.
Your writing is very erotic.
Has passed on. Doesn't realize it yet but he has entered heaven's pearly gates......
This story is great, I just wish the chapters were a little longer and not as spaced about (time wise. . .) Please keep it up!!!
Hi,
well done and a pretty nice fantasy. But, although not a native speaker, this one got me contemplating for a while: "With that, Mrs. Jacobs reached for my piece and tightly wrapped it around her fingers."
;-)
WOW!!!!!THIS WAS GR8!!!!!!WHAT'S NEXT FOR JARED!!!!!!KEEP ON WRITING.DID ANYTHING HAPPEN OVER HOLIDAYS?