All Comments on 'College Prep Ch. 04'

The story was hot, and a good example of fantasy - people should learn to suspend their disbelief! Keep writing

Joke aside, I don't know how the author figured we wanted the male character we follow from the beginning to be "punished". And for what? Making Holly enjoy her fantasies?

Anyway. Loved it till the ending.

You write well. The story was creative and I loved the twist at the end. It's a cut above what's on this site.

Hey KegRoller:)) The ending electrifying;))deliciously wicked and evil!!;))Satan?!;))ooohh..too good!! ;))

Spectacular