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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good story but ended too abruptly. Needs a more robust conclusion. Thanks for sharing this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Liked ot to a point. It was a bit rushed and is in need of a Part 2.

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Hello, I'm new to writing but I hope to write more and more as time goes on. I've definitely been terrible at staying on it... Life is difficult what can I say. I hope you enjoy my stories. Feeling free to give me feedback and make requests. I'm open to doing commissions if an...