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All Comments on 'Teacher of the Black Cocks Ch. 01'

by amenarimix

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DickeredDickeredover 2 years ago

Not bad considering English is not your native language.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please get an editor.

BoxerR100BoxerR100over 2 years ago

Not bad for a newbie. Keep writing, you will get better. You have the basics down..look forward to reading more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Garbage!!!

karl4sexkarl4sexabout 2 years ago

Your fantasies are super hot! Loved this story! This isn`t about writing in perfect trained english, it`s about making the reader hot and horny, you sure made a stunning success with me

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

good stuff

CuckRick1952CuckRick19528 months ago

Great story and very wel written! Looking forward to more.

FarmerRon1955FarmerRon195527 days ago

Honey, in my opinion there is nothing to criticize. This was a very hot story. I enjoyed it enough to give it 5 stars! I look forward to reading chapter 2!

AnonymousAnonymous27 days ago

Please get an editor. The Grammar was bad

AnonymousAnonymous8 days ago

Part 2 was too much Abuse to the woman.

literoticmanliteroticman2 days ago

You did a fabulous job. Very good story so far.

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