All Comments on 'Combat Arena Ch. 03'

by LstDghter1

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RpierzRpierzabout 9 years ago
Like series so far

Was other woman trying to warn her, could she possibly have a future potential ally? I'd like to see her get some revenge on her former team at some point.

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimabout 9 years ago
Just joined this story

Good gritty writing. I loved it.

Now going to go back and read the build up

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Excellent Story, good characterdevelopment

You're doing great. I would encourage you to stick with this. I think you can turn it into an excellent novel if you keep going.

WhenmastersaysWhenmastersaysabout 9 years ago
I love this.

Please continue, and if you ever do end up publishing this as a series, pleeeease tell me, i would love to buy it and i know a few friends who would enjoy it as well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Yes, this is a really great story and I hope to see it develop more, especially with the hope of her pulling a few wins and getting revenge.

I would also happily buy this as a series. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Interesting concept - more please!

Live action video game, meets hunger games,meets non-con fantasy... and there is a plot! Please keep the the chapters coming.

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