All Comments on 'Come As You Are Ch. 14'

I wish I could of met an Evelyn in high school. Keep up the good work. Thanx

I’m thoroughly enjoying the story, in its new incarnation.

But I think you’re wasting your time trying to humanize Danny. I’ve been alive long enough to know that total assholes exist aplenty. And they deserve to be portrayed in fiction, as well as history and current media.

Every time Evelyn speaks I hear Luna Lovegood's voice in my head.

As for Danny being a good person under the surface? I've seen no sign of that yet.

The story is incredibly entertaining, well written, and the characters are all interesting. For now, I’m wondering how Danny will handle his anger with Garrett. He gives the impression that he still wants to murder Garrett, but it wouldn’t make sense: he would be sued, the press would damage his career reputation, and ultimately he’d have to settle in the 6 to 7 figure range. I’m thinking it has to happen at a pool table.