All Comments on 'Come Closer'

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ZanysDell almost 13 years ago

Excellent

This is a really great start! Now please continue. :)

Fiera_Aurion almost 13 years ago

MORE!

Brilliant build-up! Definitely leads me to want more :)

Anonymousalmost 13 years ago

Would definitely love to read more! Great start.

Corpse_rider almost 13 years ago

Closer and closer

This is a very well written story, with convincing characterisation and dialogue. Emotional as well as physical reactions are described, something many authors on this site overlook. An enjoyable read.

Anonymousalmost 13 years ago

great start..i love it

SpeedySP almost 13 years ago

Strong beginning

Definitely interested in reading more.

kelleigh0127 almost 13 years ago

Pleasure and Pain

This seems to be such a beautiful love story. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

darkgoddessnight almost 13 years ago

Good Job!

I normally don't leave comments, but that's because I rarely finish a story on here. What can I say? I get bored easily and if the words on the page don't drag me in right away, I move on to something else. This however was extremely well written and kept me captivated through the entire chapter. There were a few parts that felt a tad bit rushed or could use a little rewording to make it more readable, but otherwise, it's a great read. I'm on to the next chapter. Keep up the good work!