by xxmarkedwithhishighdispleasure
I normally don't leave comments, but that's because I rarely finish a story on here. What can I say? I get bored easily and if the words on the page don't drag me in right away, I move on to something else. This however was extremely well written and kept me captivated through the entire chapter. There were a few parts that felt a tad bit rushed or could use a little rewording to make it more readable, but otherwise, it's a great read. I'm on to the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
This seems to be such a beautiful love story. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
This is a very well written story, with convincing characterisation and dialogue. Emotional as well as physical reactions are described, something many authors on this site overlook. An enjoyable read.