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"Not on the outside," I said.
Fwin began thrusting up into me as I rode him, deepening our intercourse. He pulled me down into him, until I was laying on him and his cock nearly fell out of me, but we manage to keep it in, barely. I laid my cheek into his chest as our hips moved together.
Neither of came again. Our motion gradually slowed until we were just laying close, bodies pressing into each other, melding into one.
"I know this is all we'll ever have, darling," I said, eventually.
Fwin was quiet.
"I have my life in the shire. I have my kids, who I will never leave the way my father left me. I'll never disrupt their lives with moving around. All I've wanted is to give them stability, and although I've failed in part, I can still do that much.
Fwin's arms held me tightly, clenching.
"I don't know what you need, darling, why you chose to spend your time here, to let me join you. But if you tell me, I'll give it to you, if I can." I had to be sure I didn't leave anything unsaid, not anymore.
"I'll be here, whenever you need me," Fwin finally promised, saying nothing of his needs, yet.
Here, I thought, here in the shadow world. It was our world now. This would be enough adventure for me. Enough for me to be the mother I wanted to be. Enough for me to not be consumed by the wander lust and need that still resided in my heart. I hoped it would be enough for him too.
At least for the moment.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous2 months agoThis has to be the shittiest story I've ever read. Stupid, dumb and degrading, you can see the direction this garbage is heading in from the very first page... Do you have even a slightest idea what actual love is like?
Anonymous11 months agoGrass is greener on the other side story. Only get married or have kids with someone you can stay with or dont bother doing either.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoOne of the easiest things to do in a relationship is to forget that your needs and wants deserve to be acknowledged and met as much as those of your partner(s) are.
Losing your identity and sense of self should never be the price for a relationship.
The main thing I love about this story is the emphasis you've placed on the need for a damaged person to want to fix themselves in order to change. We can't do it for them no matter what magic we can work or how much we want it to happen.
It's a hard truth that many can't accept. I'm sure many readers of this story saw a bit of themselves reflected in the characters you've crafted and perhaps they didn't like what they saw reflected back at them. Personally? I didn't like what I saw, but then again, I can face my shortcomings and attempt to learn from them.
5* for blending high fantasy with a cruel dose of reality so seamlessly.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoI loved this story! It took me through many emotions and arousal depths. Thank you, Author.
Tattooed_cowgirl
EarlyMorningLightalmost 2 years agoI don’t usually delve into fantasy, but I really enjoy your work, so here I am. I’m glad I made an exception.
This was wonderfully yearning and bittersweet. The slow reveal of the depth of her sadness and the husband’s abuse was handled so deftly. You did an amazing on capturing the frustration and despair of being trapped in a situation with no good options, only less bad ones.
