All Comments on 'Come on Baby Light My Fire'

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johntcookseyjohntcookseyabout 5 years ago
That was fun

My smile turned to a giggle and then a full laugh out loud. My incredulous wife’s now giggling and shaking her head while I try to negotiate my own no hands deep throat bj. Thanks. Every day should start with a good dose of humor like this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Enjoyed it

Silly but original and entertaining. Well done.

Schwanze1Schwanze1about 5 years ago
That is

My first choice of super powers. Hilarious

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
VERY FUNNY

I had a good time reading your story moreandmore 😃😄🤣❗

Thanks.

AMerryman

Freddog6601Freddog6601about 5 years ago
Fun read

Quite a creative angle. Thanks for keeping it light and entertaining.

Nicely done short humorous piece.

clarkgarbleclarkgarbleabout 5 years ago
entertaining

good, fun story.

gatorhermitgatorhermitabout 5 years ago
Cute Story - very entertaining

Appreciate this little erotic story this morning. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Pretty good imagination

Made for a good laugh. But if Bianca was THAT desperate I think she simply breaks the toilet tank and uses whatever razor sharp edge is left on the tank to cut the gloves off. Breaking the door handle off would have been child's play and then her husband was in trouble. And I'm not sure she wouldn't be SO pissed off at her husband that she might not take some form of really violent revenge. But that's just the whackjob in me. Funny story.

jneric2691jneric2691about 5 years ago
I laughed so hard

My stomach almost cramped up! Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Nice

I enjoyed this one a lot. A good read. Thanks for the story and please keep on writing.

"Buckeye Fan"

enderlocke77enderlocke77about 5 years ago
lol ok

im giving u a 5* just from the title lol i likie, ok now i'll go back and read it :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
ok

this was cute.

wife wanted to prove a point, and husband punished her for pushing it out of love/empathy.

too many reversed gender role stories where the husband shows off the 'hot-wife' and she eventually cheats and grows to hate her man. this wasn't that god awful cliche'. thank you.

gordo12gordo12about 5 years ago
Unique and entertaining

5*

enderlocke77enderlocke77about 5 years ago
rofl

o man that was funny, picturing her crap running to her car lol loved it tyvm for the laughs

TexasBBTexasBBabout 5 years ago
Funny!

Very fun and amusing story. We so can use more of these types of stories as things keep getting way too serious

prinnaveaprinnaveaabout 5 years ago
Come on Now

Really?? I liked it very much, LMAO. 5*

But now I can't get that damn song out of my head. lol

DarkerBindingDarkerBindingabout 5 years ago
lmfao

Thanks for all the laughs.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Great Story

That one was out of nowhere! Great little story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Danger will Robinson danger!

...great story. 5 stars thanx!

Loklie

26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
Fast

A little fast.paced for me, but pretty funny in the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
What can I say

That’s one of my biggest favourites of all time really enjoyed this story please write more like this please really really did enjoy reading theses sort of stories as I say don’t stop writing these fantastic stories 👍👍😂🙏

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Loved The Story

This author's stories are written with a lot of wry humour but this one is by far the best!! Couldn't stop laughing! Obviously, five stars.

Davidj001Davidj001over 4 years ago
I wish,,,

I could add the other 2 stars this stoty deserves, i laughed so hard my back hurts!

fritz51fritz51over 4 years ago
Original,

Great humor, absolutely worth the time to read.

Grimjack01Grimjack01about 4 years ago
Your humor is beyond, just beyond.

Your stories are wonderfully humorous, Thankyou for sharing them with us.

MarkT63MarkT63about 4 years ago
Funny

That would be an awesome talent.

LoejtcLoejtcabout 4 years ago
Enjoyable

It's good to lighten up once in a while in the LW category. This story certainly fills the bill. I was smiling through the whole story.

KoxokKoxokabout 4 years ago

A thought-provoking and enjoyable story. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Boxing Gloves?!

Dude, that's BRILLIANT! My girlfriend is into denial, but she pulls too hard for regular restraints. This is officially an educational site, if it wasn't already. Interestingly enough, there's been several documented examples of people who can transfer body heat through the hands, not enough to boil water or anything but enough to be registered by a heat sensor. There's also a lot of hearsay about healing touches, and I personally know of a nerve cluster in the pelvis(just ride up the inner thighs along the pubic bone and press in just below the beltline)that tickles in an excellent way, and a few spots around the lower spine that always get that relaxed moan... Maybe combine the two and see what happens?

This is a great example of ethical mind control-more like body control, but close enough! I like how as soon as he realized he had used his powers for evil, he shut it down. Any other story, he would have started his harem with those two.

26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago
Whimsey

Whiney isn't really my genre, but I did enjoy this one.

tazz317tazz317almost 4 years ago
NORM V PEALE WAS CORRECT ALONG WITH BARNUM

lo and behold along cums Aiden. TK U MLJ LV NV

jimjam69jimjam69over 3 years ago

Kind of different but I enjoyed it. Good writing.

oldtwitoldtwitover 3 years ago
Great fun reading

What a great fun read that was, so different than the normal thing on here, nice plot ( silly I know) but well thought out with great descriptions and characters

WillowghbyWillowghbyabout 3 years ago
What Fun!

Thanks to M&M for a delightful fantasy story. Short and sweet, and no humans were harmed in the making of this gem. Nice pace, excellent writing and great fun to read.

Keep 'em comin'.

Omart57Omart57almost 3 years ago

Great story, M&M!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

How does this not become a harem story?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Funny

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Loved it! Very funny! 5 stars

nixroxnixroxabout 2 years ago

5 star and very funny.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

that was fun , thanks man .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago
A stuffed wallet

Works in the same way😛

Cito22Cito22almost 2 years ago

what a whimsical funny story. loved it, was a nice change from the regular ones. 5 stars.

Just_GymJust_Gymalmost 2 years ago

Unrealistic.

But funny, I like it. 5 stars.

miket0422miket0422almost 2 years ago

Great solution to get Bianca to finally stop breaking her promise.

DreamsOfHopeDreamsOfHopeover 1 year ago

What I loved about this story is that, unlike the comment about a year ago asked, this did not become a harem story. The husband recognized his power, truly loved his wife, and wanted nothing to mess with that love. Author, I love your writing style, even if the story arc is not my favorite, your presentation is clean and clear, well polished, and finished.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story. Best thing is that the MC's talent did not corrupt him.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Creative story. Glad they kept it in the marriage. Also glad he did not abuse his talent. He could have basically any woman he wanted with his special 'power'. Sounds like he and Bianca figured out a way to keep it as a spice to their sex lives without wrecking everything.

wilks1009wilks10097 months ago

That...was...awesome!!

GardenshedGardenshed5 months ago

Haha fun story, very entertaining.

Thanks for writing.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Loved it. Totally hilarious. BardnotBard

AnonymousAnonymous25 days ago

Your imagination seems to have no bounds. This story proves it. 5 stars man. S. F.

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