All Comments on 'Comfort Food Pt. 02'

by Clementine_Danger

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

You have a really great way of pulling humor out of almost any situation which makes reading these last 2 chapters fun. Your take on Hell is refreshing but I think Jamie is an awesome character. It is so entertaining attempting to figure out how he will be found killed when his master comes home. You really have to appreciate a character that had the thought of calling an angel to help decorate a gas station for a demon especially when the person asking is the demons slave/sex toy. You have amused and entertained me greatly with these 2 chapters and I cannot wait to see what else you come up with considering you have added an apparent sociopath to the mix. It should be loads of fun if you continue with this story as I hope you do. Great job so far!

J.D.

Clementine_DangerClementine_Dangerabout 3 years agoAuthor

J.D., thank you so much for the feedback. I'm really glad you liked the story so far, and that the jokes landed for you. I hope I can keep it up!

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