All Comments on 'Comforted By Daddy Ch. 01'

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OneLongSchlongOneLongSchlong11 months ago

Damn what a hot story. 👅👅🤤💦💦

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I'll be very disappointed if you don't get knocked up.

DunkirkDunkirk11 months ago

She needs to let her dad breed her.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Hot, Hot, Hot, Hope for more chapters.

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikey11 months ago

Please write more of these two. 5 Stars.

justwarped2018justwarped201811 months ago

wow that was just a loving hot story more please

Rapierwit24601Rapierwit2460111 months ago

What next?

Well, the seduction, which often takes many pages or even chapters in other daddy/daughter stories, has already been accomplished. The deed is done. Mission accomplished.

What next?

He takes her anal cherry?

She shares him with her friends?

He shares her with his friends?

He breaks out the whips and chains?

Short of that, any further d/d coupling is just “same ole, same old”.

And I fail to see how making her pregnant, fat and hormonal is anything sexy.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

As Ed Sullivan would say . . . A REALLY GOOD SHOW.

The descriptive aspects of your writhing have put us all right there, watching, totally immersed in this scene.

Five ( 5 ) beautifully earned stars.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Great story loved it very much

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Mm more please so good

SometimeintheMorningSometimeintheMorning11 months ago

"Somebody had wanted me tonight after all"-How I loved that line. Can't wait to read chapter 2

Angus_of_AngushireAngus_of_Angushire11 months ago

Excellently written, I got very hard.

If continuing, as we've gone this far without much physical description of Dad, please don't add one. It would undoubtedly clash with the mental picture of him we already have in our head.

I find it useful to have at least a general description of each character as they're introduced to avoid the "sour" feeling when a descriptive passage just doesn't jive with the movie playing in our heads. I mean, try to imagine Shirley Temple as Dorothy in The Wizard of Oz. It's just a bit off.

And I agree that Sydney getting pregnant would diminish the story. However, adding others to their bed could be thrilling.

More, please

OseekerOseeker10 months ago

Good stoey....I thought that there should have been more naughty dialog between them but overall...Pretty hot story.

4 stars

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Good girl!

NipkorNipkor10 months ago

Love a sexual bond inside a dad and d relationship. Very sexy start , 5*

LordDeanLordDean9 months ago

What a wonderful, sexy story, just like Daddy/daughter should be. Your words painted some very erotic, hardening images.

MikeykeithMikeykeith9 months ago

FIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINE!!!

stockingnutstockingnut9 months ago

So fucking hot! Great writing.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Please write more stories. Your stories get my pussy so wet and make me so hot and horny

Campus77Campus774 months ago

A well written love story between father and daughter. Once this taboo is broken, there is no going back. Part two is next.

storyteller4u2storyteller4u2about 2 months ago

Love this story, well written and compelling from start to finish. On to Chapter 2!

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