by nickisilvers
What next?
Well, the seduction, which often takes many pages or even chapters in other daddy/daughter stories, has already been accomplished. The deed is done. Mission accomplished.
What next?
He takes her anal cherry?
She shares him with her friends?
He shares her with his friends?
He breaks out the whips and chains?
Short of that, any further d/d coupling is just “same ole, same old”.
And I fail to see how making her pregnant, fat and hormonal is anything sexy.
As Ed Sullivan would say . . . A REALLY GOOD SHOW.
The descriptive aspects of your writhing have put us all right there, watching, totally immersed in this scene.
Five ( 5 ) beautifully earned stars.
"Somebody had wanted me tonight after all"-How I loved that line. Can't wait to read chapter 2
Excellently written, I got very hard.
If continuing, as we've gone this far without much physical description of Dad, please don't add one. It would undoubtedly clash with the mental picture of him we already have in our head.
I find it useful to have at least a general description of each character as they're introduced to avoid the "sour" feeling when a descriptive passage just doesn't jive with the movie playing in our heads. I mean, try to imagine Shirley Temple as Dorothy in The Wizard of Oz. It's just a bit off.
And I agree that Sydney getting pregnant would diminish the story. However, adding others to their bed could be thrilling.
More, please
Good stoey....I thought that there should have been more naughty dialog between them but overall...Pretty hot story.
4 stars
What a wonderful, sexy story, just like Daddy/daughter should be. Your words painted some very erotic, hardening images.
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Please write more stories. Your stories get my pussy so wet and make me so hot and horny
A well written love story between father and daughter. Once this taboo is broken, there is no going back. Part two is next.
Love this story, well written and compelling from start to finish. On to Chapter 2!