by ashbee32
Outstanding original story. Your thoughts about the story were so real. Your description of the people just needs a little more detail for those of us who want to picture what each character looked like in the story. My wife is 5'9" & very fit & healthy. Our children were breast fed so she is a healthy 39 D cup. Her legs hip to toe are 42 inches of Amazon muscle. I can relate to your story concerning the issues & situation. My wife did not like the women I worked with would have hurt them to let them know to stay away. She never liked any of the women I worked with so I know more about your story then you could have told. Please write again & use your wonderful imagination. CHEERS
Two for the price of one here. The brother / sister relationship was nice, but Tracy's domination of Kara in the ring was super hot.
A good story, bought back a lot of memories of the love between myself and my sister for a year before I was taken abroad for my work.
Thank you for good dialog and not putting in drivel like "pre-cum". well done.
The story is amazing and i definitely want a part 2 but i would like to see more detail in the sex
Good story, nice lead up, but the sex was a huge let down. Three short paragraphs, a dozen or so sentences. You could have done better. Thank you.
you need to write some more, this was very good and I look foreward to reading more.