All Comments on 'Comforting My Hot Sister'

by ashbee32

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MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikey8 months ago

5 Stars. Please write a chapter two.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Wow such a beautiful storie ending could have been a bit longer

Ilovetophoto68Ilovetophoto688 months ago

Any chance of part 2?

sp9983sp99838 months ago

She should wear nothing.

stockingnutstockingnut8 months ago

Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Outstanding original story. Your thoughts about the story were so real. Your description of the people just needs a little more detail for those of us who want to picture what each character looked like in the story. My wife is 5'9" & very fit & healthy. Our children were breast fed so she is a healthy 39 D cup. Her legs hip to toe are 42 inches of Amazon muscle. I can relate to your story concerning the issues & situation. My wife did not like the women I worked with would have hurt them to let them know to stay away. She never liked any of the women I worked with so I know more about your story then you could have told. Please write again & use your wonderful imagination. CHEERS

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Two for the price of one here. The brother / sister relationship was nice, but Tracy's domination of Kara in the ring was super hot.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

A good story, bought back a lot of memories of the love between myself and my sister for a year before I was taken abroad for my work.

RocketPopsicleRocketPopsicle7 months ago

Thank you for good dialog and not putting in drivel like "pre-cum". well done.

YaBoiBigChungus7YaBoiBigChungus77 months ago

The story is amazing and i definitely want a part 2 but i would like to see more detail in the sex

JamjohnnyJamjohnny7 months ago

More. Great premise. I hope more is coming!

Robinius1Robinius17 months ago

Good story, nice lead up, but the sex was a huge let down. Three short paragraphs, a dozen or so sentences. You could have done better. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Well done!

unclemerv77unclemerv774 months ago

you need to write some more, this was very good and I look foreward to reading more.

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