All Comments on 'Comforting My Sister'

Definitely worth continuing well written, likeable characters I want to know where this goes

Well written. Nice pace. Looking forward to more!

Please share the rest of the story... It is great so far!!

Looking forward to part 2

Yes please to more! Great writing.

Definitely needs to be continued! What I noticed though is that her room was pretty cold but she was sleeping naked?

Great writing. Somehow a true story always has spontaneity which fiction can't match. Continue? YES!

More please.

Love the slow build up. Reminds me of another UK member asperpen and his series The Garden Shed

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=2002362&page=submissions

True stories to me are the most erotic 5*'s

WOw! Really well written, nice story. More please!

More please

agree with the other comments. Nicely written and a nice pace. Would love to see the continuation of this.

You have a good start, we’re interested in reading and enjoying more!

These stories are never true and you should just stick to writing, it would be less pathetic

Yes, Yes More. Well written.

Great read so far! Would love to see it continue!

Yes, we need chapter 2. Great start. Keep it going!!!

Yes we would like to read more please it's good story .Thank you

Thank you for sharing. I, too, look forward to more of your story.

Great story would love to hear the rest

Yes continue.

Very good, looking forward to more

great start needs a couple more chapters

I dont care if its true or not...nice start. Write more.

It's neither here nor there for me, but if you decide to continue, I suggest that you do two things first.

First, find an imagination so you can include some kind of plot in the next installment. Without this, you've simply spouted a bunch of words that the uneducated think are hot so must be in a titillating story even when they're not.

If you succeed at that project, you absolutely must resolve to actually care about typing out something that isn't riddled with incorrect words, badly placed and missing punctuation, and incorrect verb tenses. Even with a plot, had there been one in this submission, those problems detract enough to make the reading unenjoyable.

If those two simple things are just too much like work for you, then you definitely shouldn't continue.

TBC... REEEEEEEEEEEEE

Please continue, there has to be more.

Excellent 1st part, please continue

Excellent story, my erection seconds it too, would like to know more please . Thank you for sharing.

Great read. Please continue...

A jolly good start, I'd like to read more.

Continue please.

More more!!!

Very good writing, slow introduction, I liked the cat and mouse attraction and finally giving in to each other, but ending should've been him starting to get in the shower with her......

Very good !! I need another chapter asap

Give the sexy older brother a splash of sexy chest hair across his chest and abs! He seems a sexy young man eager to please his sister! And they can build from there!

cute

Very intriguing and exciting 😀. I'm loving what y'all have shared so far. I really hope that you decide to share more with the rest of the world here.

Something about your story really got me all worked up if you get what I am saying? Even if you don't choose to continue sharing your story on here I'd love to hear more if you are willing to share with someone else.

I'm very much interested in and looking forward to reading more of your story soon.

Keep up with your writing, you have a talent for it.

Yes, of course continue. Truth is always welcome. I enjoy the plot of two teenagers crossing over to

adulthood and the moments happening along the way. Just put enough taboo in the story so that

some self appointed judge wont scold you for having this in the wrong category 😋

Yes, of course continue. Truth is always welcome. I enjoy the plot of two teenagers crossing over to

adulthood and the moments happening along the way. Just put enough taboo in the story so that

some self appointed judge wont scold you for having this in the wrong category 😋

A great story now write the next story and another to follow. Good writing well done thank you.

I read through the other comments before adding my own. So I was honestly surprised by the comment left by Cageysea. I found one or two typos, but nothing majorly wrong. It wasn't plagiarized by any means, but I have read several stories following the same basic premise.

I actually enjoyed it because lately there has been a lot of worthless crap posted here and it was refreshing that you painted your main characters as more or less ordinary people. I get so sick of the humongous boobs on every girl and the ten inch porn star cock on every guy. Thank you for not going down that path!

This wasn't a 5 star story, but I would love to read more, so please continue with it to the natural ending. 4/5

"Comforting My Sister Ch. 01:" - Twenty Year Old Brother, Robert (Rob) and Eighteen Year Old Sister, Kimberly (Kim).

Being an initial story offering and non-fiction, I'm of the opinion this story has sufficient interest to be well received by the Literortica family readers of brother and sister incest, and especially with having a foundation of love and romance!! Brother Rob and sister Kim--as lovers and as Literotica writers--have a great following of seasoned readers. I'm looking forward for the story to continue, at least until their familial life-style is told entirely. I'm also anticipating children of the siblings!!

By the way, pay no heed to the (mostly anonymous) naysayer's comments! They do not have the understanding--nor appreciation of the risks and exposures of true-life familial incest; let'em suck on a snake's head!

Love it, pease finish the story. Would like to on a what transpired between you and your everything turned out.

Great story!

The build up is sexy!

Please write part 2

Stories like this make me wish I had a brother

Looking forward to the next part and more!

I would love to read so.e more.

Where is part 2?!