All Comments on 'Coming Around Again'

Great writing! Nice progression, great character development, hot sex. Loved it.

Great story but grammar needs improvement. You need to be careful with past participles in perfect tenses

They need to own their attraction with each other. I hope they will not be the macho assholes who joke about it and then act like it didn’t happen. If Graham wanted Mack from the beginning, be man enough to tell him that and let it go where it does.

Wonderful. I felt like we learned just enough about them without it taking up the entire story. The attraction was there, the jokes, the chemistry; it felt very natural. Your descriptions of the sex made me feel like I was experiencing it! Well done.

Series potential! Another great read from a talented Author. Give us more...

A very hot story well told. Thank you.

I’m disappointed that Graham and Mack didn’t open up honestly with each other and admit their mutual sexual attraction. Maybe they will if there is a sequel. But don’t be all jokes and macho shit and act like they don’t have a special bond and mean a great deal to each other. I get the sense the Graham has had a thing for Mack since they served - and Mack is realizing the same toward Graham.

Nice reminder that any body can be attracted to and make love with any other body thanks

This story is hot but way too short! There needs to be a sequel where they talk about their feelings and previous male sexual experiences and then some more hot fucking followed by talking about if they have a future together!