All Comments on 'Coming Home'

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I loved it! My only feedback might be that I'm noticing a patterns that, if it was varied a little more, would make for a more intensive experience. Between this story and the beastly roommates, using hunger/rumbling stomachs as a method of moving on /completing a sex scene happens a lot. I mean it's very realistic, so in that sense it works, and it actually got me to go make dinner after reading your great stories for a long while, but it's not something I want to think about when I'm trying to enjoy a good steamy story. I hope to see more of your stories soon! Thank you for this incredible use of your spare time.