All Comments on 'Coming Home to Puppy'

Ok, LolaKink87, not bad for the start of a loving BDSM Novella. Suggest you illuminate yourself on the proper use of lie versus lay verbs & their appropriate tenses. In your closing sentence it should be "lies" instead of "lays". Otherwise, your content is well written. I'm available for proof reading & editing. Contact if you wish.

Love it. Hope not your last!!