All Comments on 'Coming of Age'

Very moving. Will eagerly follow this as it develops.

MORE, PLEASE!!!!!!!!

Wow! It's been a while since I've had tears in my eyes reading a story here. Looking forward to future chapters.

WOW, this was one of the most moving stories that I've ever read. You had me in tears nearly the whole time while reading this. And you've also got me eagerly waiting to find out what will happen next. MLF

Too many short sentences of which many could have been combined into one sentence.

Putting the person’s name that is speaking is not the best way to express it, would flow much better by saying at the end of the sentence, `said Elliot as he flopped on the sofa` for example. I hope you see this as positive criticism because apart from that I did enjoy the story even though the first part made me sad, well actually most of it made me sad so I do hope the story continues.

I cried through this and absolutely fell in love with Scott and AJ. What an amazing start to what I be!ieve will be an amazing story. Thank you

What a great start to what I hope will be an ongoing story.

I hope you develop a loving romance and support between AJ an Scott. I think there is already something there that can be developed. Very moving and loving story!

Such a beautiful story. Alot of us can relate to the story.