All Comments on 'Command and Vanquish Ch. 02'

I'm a loving this story line. This installment kept me on the edge of my seat. Please continue!

I'm really enjoying this story. But...it's utterly unrealistic the way people are consistently whipped near death and then hold conversations, eat, have sex laying on their backs, etc. Methinks you don't understand how ridiculous those situations sound. Yes, we must suspend our sense of reality but this is just asking too much and disturbs the weaving of an otherwise darn good piece of fiction.

I love this story! It's totally bizarre. The whole time I'm thinking: 'any minute now, any minute now and she'll tell him to go put his dick in a blender.' Then I remember that they didn't have blenders way back then and I'm not completely sure which planet they are from. Placated, I read on. The blender has now been replaced with a cigar cutter. I really like this story!

Jem is beyond evil, it is absurd that Iz would still love him and that Raynth would forgive him, it's absolutely ridiculous how easily he got off. This type of story is only gratifying if the bad guys get proper comeuppance, but it doesn't seem like he's going to get it :(