All Comments on 'Command Ch. 02'

Good build up and great sex scene. Chapter seemed very short, try exstending it past a few pages. There is potential for good character growth.

My my Jake :))

not the 'Sir','Master' ,'hellcat and flogger and bullwhip','forced to give the unknown pizza guy a blowjob' etc for her....but such physically unhurtful dominance over a gorgeous female sub!!! :))any bit of humiliation is kept exclusively personal between the dom and the sub!!wow!!:))no calling her names....:)

the strong undercurrent of the dom and the sub's never put into words hugest crush for each other spices things up forever more!!:))whats the male dom whom his female sub does not have a crush on?;)

and the dom's constant shuttlecocking between sincere apologising and unapologetic commanding....oooh:))your chapter 1 and 2 are 3 things for BDSM rom's :-

'entertainment,entertainment,entertainment'!!!:))

as relaxing as a terrific ecstasy giving orgasm!!:))reading was such delight!!:))

take a cue all the guy writers out there;) in 'Command's hero have we finally got a real man in BDSM lit,for a delicious as ever change?:)) raw manly charm and power and dominance..yoohooo!! ;)

please dont stop...more please....this is so-o-o good OMG!!;););)