All Comments on 'Command Me Ch. 02'

by bluetart68

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PixiehoffPixiehoffabout 3 years ago

Another enjoyable and powerfully erotic chapter. Just look at the tense thing I mentioned in my comments on the first chapter if you would be so kind. For some readers, the great enjoyment your powerful imagination offers might be modified by the tenses. xx

JosephWritesJosephWritesabout 3 years ago

It is seldom that I come here and find truly good stories. I read your first two, both were erotic and excellent! Thanks for the orgasm. I can't wait for your next story about horny Calista.

bluetart68bluetart68about 3 years agoAuthor

@josephwrite Thank you so much! Your encouragement and words really brightened my day! Hope the next installment can bring you to another orgasm! :)

@pixiehoff Absolutely, I will do my best! I unfortunately did not see that first comment before impatiently releasing the second Chapter. I definitely understand how bad grammar can take one out of the fantasy. I will do better!

PixiehoffPixiehoffabout 3 years ago

Thank you so much bluetart, I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Xx

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