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lc69hunterlc69hunter9 months ago

wow, just wow. You wrote this totally genderless

MigbirdMigbird5 months ago

Intriguing piece. Felt real — proprioceptive, yes, and so tactile, which heightened the sexual experience. The oral experience - taste, smell, moistness — so very erotic. Not sure if you were trying to create a genderless experience, but the lack of breast play was noticeable and unfortunate — like a part of the tactile experience left unexplored which diminished the erotic potential. Loved the outcome — checking boxes; your two characters so want to get together after truly anonymous experience. 5 stars. Thanks for sharing your imagination

AnecdoteskepticAnecdoteskeptic3 months ago

A refreshing genderless story, but passionate nevertheless . Nice reference to Plato’s Allegory of the Cave. Perhaps more development of the allegoy in the story would be nice, but that is just a quibble- personal preference.

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