by Booleanean
Intriguing piece. Felt real — proprioceptive, yes, and so tactile, which heightened the sexual experience. The oral experience - taste, smell, moistness — so very erotic. Not sure if you were trying to create a genderless experience, but the lack of breast play was noticeable and unfortunate — like a part of the tactile experience left unexplored which diminished the erotic potential. Loved the outcome — checking boxes; your two characters so want to get together after truly anonymous experience. 5 stars. Thanks for sharing your imagination
A refreshing genderless story, but passionate nevertheless . Nice reference to Plato’s Allegory of the Cave. Perhaps more development of the allegoy in the story would be nice, but that is just a quibble- personal preference.