by nickdoe512
Is a wonderful thing. I am sorry but it is so hard to read with all the typos. I think if you pull it, have it edited, and resubmitted your scores would be better. It is just unreadable as is.
There are some errors that show you are not a native speaker, and those need to be fixed. On the other hand, that slight awkwardness is part of the charm of your style, and I wouldn't want to lose that. So try to find an editor who will be sensitive to this and not blue-pencil your style into oblivion.