All Comments on 'Complicated'

Didnt even read to end gave up

I really like the subtle "social" aspect of this hypnosis. Hypnosis stories that play on existing tendencies—like our inability to get out of bed, be rude to a guest, or, of course, stop playing with bubble wrap—have this extra dimension of immersiveness that you're amazing atportraying, and this story presents an interesting POV character to get immersed in.

To be honest, I wasn't planning to post on this story, but then I saw the anonymous troll. I felt like there should be more comments than that one on a story this good. :P

Well, now I just look silly. I can't believe I forgot a name as memorable as "bj2004"...

I love all your stories! The slow build from "normal life" to immersed hypnosis is perfect... bj2004 doesn't have a clue what they missed out on. Keep writing! I always read your stories :)

Amazing story. I check every day to see if you've posted something new, they're all so detailed and incredibly well written!

amazing, detailed and creative as always