by nightscribe
Well it was a half-decent series and there was so much more to tell. Wonder why the author stopped? And yeah there was way too much BJ/throatfucking but I guess the author just really likes that stuff. I wish there was more variety in the sex and a bit more plot. Anyway, I've read worse.
This is a bad story in the mind control subject. Way too much violence. Mike is a scumbag and his buddy Jim is the same.
Worst chapter of the series. Too many BJ's throughout the series. Take those out and you have MAYBE three chapters. Roughing up women is demeaning.
You lost me when Mike spit blood in Kay's face and Jim fuck-bashed Joy's head against the wall. Glad there is no next part, this is too stupid.
Interesting story, but no anal.
NO male if given that opportunity would fail to fuck his submissive women up the arse.
Wouldn't happen.
I jumped out of my chair when they came in. Hahahahahahahahahahahahaha that was a great ending!!!!!!!!!!! I added it so I will know when the next update is released. Great job!
Good story except for the sharing/group sex. Just my personal taste. Others seem to like it though. What happened to Abby???
Please please continue that story coz its 1 of the best keep it up
....for not continuing this adolescent minded story written for adolescent minded fans.
I really liked this story and would love to read more in this story line im serious your really creative I was hanging on every word
Hey this is heating up, please write more... I want to know more about Rose and Captain Knox and what their plans are. I also would love to see Rose take Jennifer into her power and away from Mike.
Go fuck your self with a black dill do it was AWSOME AWSOME AWSOME and more AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You are one sick fucking bastard. You ought to be locked up in isolation for the rest of your miserable fucking life.
it feels as if the mistress had something to do with his mom's dad and her husband death
with Karen Knox and the Mistress in the background. something is bound to come between them esp if Mike takes Karen and displeases the Mistress plus Mr. Winters has to go. so Mike can have a House for his Harem.
I think Joan should b bac in story where he takes over her completely!! Where takes control of her property n Also fucks her while he calls for robin n Sam! He can suprise them with having Joan under control! U could hav them get revenge over Joan where she gets humiliated etc etc
Hated all the sharing in your story. It would have been much better without it.
It's good to read a story that can turn you on and have you laughing at the same time!!
I am with those asking you for more this arc seems to have a fine run but you set up too many other threads not to explore them.
Who is this Rose? What other controllers are there out there and what are they up to?
Please! Let us know more about this world you are creating.
You can't leave us hanging like that! We need more!
Please continue,this is a great series can't wait to see what happens next.Hope to read more soon!
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I like the storyline; interesting characters, nice build up of all - at least the main players - look forward to further installments soon.
Wondering if Julie will ever be able to get her fingers out of her pussy. Now that is going to be one horny little bitch after being denied orgasm until he returns.
Like to see Abby developed into more with Mike's family, etc.
I like keep it coming Please.
Seems like the story is really coming together and look forward to further installments.
So far this is an amazing story, and i love how you arent relying solely on mikes power, i can see how its going to influence future installments, but so far its more of a backdrop for a wild orgy of emotions
KEEP WRITING GREAT STORIES
You could end this story right here, a cliff-hanger and let imaginations take it to their own conclusions. Jim's mother and sister coming in was great, and the very different responses from them both are just right.
Looking forward to more of your work. Just remember that repetition, in excess, can become a drag. You're creative enough, use that imagination and keep on writing.
This is by far one of the best stories i've read in awhile.Please continue!