All Comments on 'Confessing to Meredith'

This has possibilities but at the moment it reads almost as if it's an extract from a far longer piece of work---it's a bit vague and unsatisfactory. It is well enough written so I'd certainly encourage you to keep writing. Hard work and practice can only help you to get better.

A decent first effort but it really needs more editing. The several lexical ambiguities made it hard to figure who was saying or doing what. Please don't be discouraged and keep writing. Practice makes perfect, after all. You have good ideas and potential.