by subchristopher
I enjoyed the story. You did a great job with the story and the plot. I would love to see a second chapter of this story. Thank you for your story.
I loved the story, I hope you can continue it soon.
I have a doubt, the ex-girlfriend, Rachel stayed in the past or will she resurface to continue the punishment of Chris?
As are all of your stories, this one is incredibly intense. Your writing improves. Thank you for this story.
I like the detail and the pace of the story.
Revealing his thoughts as the story unfolds really added to my enjoyment of reading it.
I hope I can come close to your ability if I continue my own writing.
Superb character development, storytelling, and dialogue. I hope this series continues!
Thanks very much, Chris!
This was awful, awful in the sense that it is a well-written account of what can happen to undeserving men. I read it with increasing fear and excitement in equal measures as Chrisβ ordeal progressed.
Before reading the next instalment Iβll need to cool down first and get locked up before.