by Dawnspell8
Fairly good writing, (except for the few typos and also ought to have indicated the age of Simon more clearly at an earlier stage), but unusual and odd the story is.
Difficult to get what really is the purpose of this story.
Guy asks his friend to meet him to tell about a major event/development of the kind you normally doesn't want to get known by others.
Friend gives an ambiguous response about which the guy apparently is content, and then leaves to break up his hitherto life. At the side some mental tickling with an unrelated clairvoyant woman who could want the tickling to be of the more physical kind.
For a written piece that in a short form wants to depict some of the many quirks of human life, it's OK.
As an erotic story, (which after all is what one expect to find on this site, it doesn't work at.
If i'd found it in the Non-erotic category I might have nodded my head and said: "Hmmm ...".