by rlaflamme
I questioned what was with this story when I saw the rating, a much lower rating than what is common for the author. The realization of it hit quickly, the ratings are low simple because he made the mistake of putting it in the wrong section. In the proper section this story would be very high on the "hot" scale. It is wonderfully written and the originality of it is amazing. What a great way for a wife to show the love she has for her husband!
It is really too bad the author made a mistake on the placement of it, as that can be the only reason for the lower rating.
Good job rlaflamme, don't let the ratings get you down about this story, it is great!