All Comments on 'Confessions of a Submissive Pt. 04'

by Keiryn

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DaniellaxmjtsDaniellaxmjtsalmost 5 years ago
The story could be so much better

If you would write the sex scenes in detail. This really isnโ€™t all that interesting the way it is written. I would love to be more supportive. Writing is good otherwise, articulate. We want to know your feelings when you are in each act for Sir.

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