All Comments on 'Confessions of an Online Predator Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Love the Idea

The story line is a great original idea, considering that daily, married men are using online dating services to cheat.

The sex was hot! Please, lets have more.

don87654don87654almost 18 years ago
Great reading!

These little pussies that you are fucking after meeting them on line you need to provide them with something to remember you by, like a baby or two...all the while that you remain married to your honey at home?

Selena_KittSelena_Kittalmost 18 years ago
You were mentioned...

You were mentioned in the Author's Hangout New Story Reviews...

RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyalmost 18 years ago
Wow...

If Selena hadn't beat me to mentioning you on the reviews thread I'd have done it! I don't know what she said, since I haven't checked it out yet, but stumbled across this erotic write myself! I hope it was praise, for I think this was a very Hot and Excellent read! Thanks for the stimulation I needed before heading to bed. ;) ~ Red

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
She was really into disrespect and pain wasn't she

You really humbled her mentally and physically. Officialy a new sub slut for domination to all depths.

Is that good?

Angel LoveAngel Lovealmost 18 years ago
Good job!

Told ya this was a good one. It was very original. Keep em coming hon . . . angel.

Angel LoveAngel Lovealmost 18 years ago
Good job!

Told ya this was a good one. It was very original. Keep em coming hon . . . angel.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
pretty hot!

i liked it a lot!! more more more!!!!!

Nick

widespreadinterestswidespreadinterestsover 17 years ago
A little too generic for my taste

... this is a good premise, but it isn't particularly erotic, despite the sex. I think that's because you simply tick off the various sex acts like you're reading a menu - there isn't a sense of two hot bodies being used for pleasure.

don87654don87654about 15 years ago
Lying

You lie so well that you should have promised her the moon and then knocked the slut up with your bastard baby!

DWornockDWornockover 12 years ago
1* because the following is so stupid

She was an All-American cheerleader type when we started dating. The last two decades have only improved her looks and personality.

ArieluArieluover 11 years ago
This is going to be some good reading ...

Love it

mitchawamitchawaover 6 years ago
Well Done

An unusual plot. Happy at home and horny on the road. Good approach and seduction methods. Thoughtful to have more than on female on the line at the same time. The sex scenes with his wife and first on-line conquest were well done. The characters are well described as are the settings. The dialogue is in keeping with the plot and the interior dialogue fits the main characters profile. I'm sorry, I only discovered your stories and this comment is now almost 12 years late. I"ll read more.

NitpicNitpic6 months ago
Another

Another arsehole story.

Anonymous
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