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All Comments on 'Confronted with Homophobia Pt. 06'

by koksocker333

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bienclarbienclaralmost 4 years ago

Ok. Before you publish the next chapter, I'm begging you to read what you've written out loud to yourself. If the sentence is too long for you to say in one breath, you need to make it into two sentences. If it's clunky and awkward and uncomfortable, consider rewriting it.

Also learn the difference between "your" and "you're".

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

I like how Robert and Tom are coming together. Can’t wait until Robert gives it to Tom. The story is very good.

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