by Wayne48
Nicely done, appreciate the effort. M/F/K was a believable add to the story. Made it stand out for me.
I appreciate the feedback! Makes me want to write another, thank you!
Very well done. The narrator mentions that he's stopped caring what people think of him, then tells his story in just that way.
Excellent first story. I was a bit short, so I hope you finish the store in an additional chapter(s).
The Story is great but it is way to short! I hope there will be a second part.