All Comments on 'Consensual Incest with Mum Ch. 01'

Needs punctuation! Couldn't read it.

Great start 5 Stars

I like the way it is going 5 Stars

Your stories make me so wet 5 Stars

Babs is ready for it 5 Stars

Does Sally get to join the mom an son? Does mom have hidden lesbian urges? Excellent beginning. Hope to see where this winds up!

Love the increasing sexual tension you have built, both in the characters and most likely the readers. Patiently waiting on next part of the adventure.

Babs neeeds to have her pussy filled with her son's seed.

Part of an editor's job is to find the stray run-on sentences, not to teach the typist basic English. This is filled with almost nothing but run-on sentences. Find a writing class, get a book on grammar, THEN work with an editor.

Please do not publish another story without having it edited. Your story was very difficult to read, and was not all that arousing. I'm not sure how your story rated 4.58, but it obviously copied the theme of much better stories on this site.

I liked this story. Please more chapters. An editor will help!

I like where this is going. Maybe Babs will put on stockings for their next date.

Too much tease and not enough story.

I have to agree with some of the comments here. The basic grammar and punctuation errors throughout this story render it a really challenging read, continually pulling the reader out of the story. 2/5

Love the teasing, taking it nice and slow and setting the scene.

I can't get into the story. There are so many punctuation errors and two hundred word sentences to be able to concentrate. Shame, I wanted to like it.

I enjoyed it write more

You lost me at 10 inch cock. *

Cliché AF.

I can't read this.

I've just read a story with Barry and Babs.

Babs was getting a divorce and was a pharmacist. Now she is an accountant and widow.

To distracting.