All Comments on 'Consolation Surprise Pt. 02'

by clintorres

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
bad finish

really needs a better finish possibly work in a couple more chapters

ScorpioJJScorpioJJover 6 years ago
unfinished

This has potential. Please finish it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
will this ever be finished?

it needs one more chapter to wrap it all up. Please do so.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
nice story

nice little story you've got going. hope you wrap it up soon.

clintorresclintorresalmost 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Thank you for following the story line, and for the great comment!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
WTF!

Excellent writing continues and great story line. Katie needs kicked to the curb after a verbal reality check that she's gonna have to pay for her daughter's private school, Scott needs his ass severely kicked and Denny needs to know the entire situation with how it's going implode. Katie has fucked up big and lost her good deal, so her men problems are probably a larger percentage her then the guys she has fucked.

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