All Comments on 'Contract Negotiation Ch. 04'

Just another narcissistic slut story. These type of female characters would never be married. They are just wanton whores and no one wants that as their full time partner. The writer glorifies her cheating and one can only hope that karma would bring an STD or three to these awful and pathetic group of narcissists. Ridiculous

It's just a dumb story. Nothing more.

It lacks any sense.

Even then, we readers, linking it or not, the author is free to write whatever he wants.

Do you know how to write a story that the sluts get caught cheating. No wonder I keep giving you a 1 as a score.

Being the episode 4 in the series, the story is less original and toward the expected result (multiple partners). Yet it is well executed. The criticism about the "slut" and "whore" character is even more expected: there stories are also written to allow angry comments against the "slut" and to enable them to bestow low scores.

What can I say? I like the way it is written, the reluctance of the main character and her obedience to her sexual needs, the ellipsis (repetitive sex scenes can be boring: it is nice to narrate from the end and through flashback). Five stars to the narator even if not full score to the subject.