All Comments on 'Control Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
hmmmmm

That has potential, however, it would be nice if he could show just a little more caring toward her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Excellent!

Keep going stormyadventures! This is such a hot beginning, where will it lead, forced submission, becoming Sirs slut beyond her wildest imagination, perhaps he takes her right to the edge, keeps her there, tormenting her, all for his enjoyment, mind fucking??? I'll be looking for part 2!

kisses shelly

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