All Comments on 'Controlled Foster Family Ch. 02'

Looking forward to more, liking how they are "waning it", corruption is fun

Great story , I WANT MORE

I don't know if it's intended, but I like the sense of humor on this story.

knowing the dad is an abuser of the women chad should help them be free of the dad and take all the money the bastard has and still have the women for sex, have the dad get caught fucking the church pastor in the ass by raping him and dad goes to jail,lol

Thanks for the feedback. Was kind of bored with the "total mind control" stories that I had been reading. Trying to make this a struggle for all of them, especially Chad. Can you imagine how hard it must be for an 18yr old to slow play this?

A good story is a believable story even if it's a mindcontrol fantasy . From this perspective, hypnotism does not appeal to me, it seems the weakest and most incredible means of controlling someone's mind . But the mention that the years of total submission made the members of the cult very susceptible changes the situation, makes it acceptable. And yes an 18yr old guy can't wait to fuck a woman until next day that'd pretty incredibile also but maybe he is a old spirit in a young body and a very pervert one ? Overall and considering how ofertant the cult subiect is a verry promising story

This is great, loving the story thus far and the ups and downs of the main character learning the limits of his power.

Good story hope there is more soon

So, the daughters names are Mary and Rebecca. Is the mother's name Susan or Sarah? You flip flop between the two and it creates confusion for the reader.

Main character in one of my other stories was Susan, got them confused. I will work on using other letters, sorry.

did not enjoy the pony part but enjoyed all the rest