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All Comments on 'Controlled Foster Family Ch. 03'

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Stormwalker10027Stormwalker10027over 1 year ago

Is the mother’s name Susan or Sarah? You also called the father Joshua once or twice. It is very confusing to the reader.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

You don’t seem to be able to keep track of your own characters

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Loving getting the ideas in my head out for you to enjoy. If you have a suggestion add it in a comment, I have incorporated reader suggestions in previous stories.