All Comments on 'Controlled Foster Family Ch. 04'

Excellent chapter! Can't wait for the next one.

А ДАЛЬШЕ?!

Wonderful - you are an entertaining writer

so with Jacob gone for an extended period time for some more kinky stuff, casual nudity, bondage or puppy/pony girls?

Dude, don’t act like Chad is a protector and Jacob the monster. They’re both the same. Chad is worse because he’s whom you want to be…and that’s just pathetic.

Like you.

Great job! Appreciate the work you put into this. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you

Holy shitsnacks Whackdoodle, if you don't like this story then you should definitely NOT read any of my others. Kidnapped Campers would send you through the roof!!!

I had some doubts but the story progressed according to my expectations, male domination with a fairly believable plot. It has already become my new favorite in the mind control section

Yeah, Whackdoodle's been bouncing around insulting people for the last week or so. Kind of weird, you'd think they'd have better things to do. Don't mind 'em, you're a good author, and putting fantasies like these in writing is substantially better than actually trying to fulfill them.

The names and trigger words are keep jumbling between their subsidiaries... It does break the flow for readers...

The names and trigger words are keep jumbling between their subsidiaries... It does break the flow for readers...

It is great

But what about the other people that were hypnotized at the church?

Chad could take advantage of them all.

By going to church ant say CHICKEN and thru them find who were all the people that still under the spell.