by Kmaster3000
Awesome to see that he is trying to make this a real fily and resolve issues Rather than just sex
I was very curious how Chad will convince the girls to accept Sarah as a sex partner, but I see now that there is a strategy. In other mind control stories, the mc simply gives some orders and the slave executes them, but here we only have a slight hypnotic influence. So at 18, Chad seems very inspired in what he does. Very good construction of the Sarah character that I like the most
I was very curious how Chad will convince the girls to accept Sarah as a sex partner, but I see now that there is a strategy. In other mind control stories, the mc simply gives some orders and the slave executes them, but here we only have a slight hypnotic influence. So at 18, Chad seems very inspired in what he does. Very good construction of the Sarah character that I like the most
TBH, I mostly look for stroke stories but this story caught my eye and I am glad it did. Good pacing, great characters and a very good story line. BRAVO!
I got the impression that some elements in this chapter are things you wanted to touch in the kidnapped campers story, but they fitted better here. I just hope that Rebecca and Sarah can still love each other despite what Jacob did. I'm kinda thorn with how Chad turned Rebecca into a Mistress because Sarah was her mother figure, it's a little bit sad that Rebecca lost this reference, but as it was said in the chapter, change isn't bad.
Is Susan really Sarah? Or is Sarah really Susan? Why did they swap identities? Will they get a new name at any time?