All Comments on 'Conumdrum Ch. 04'

I m liking it.It's getting good chapter by chapter.I m desperately waiting to see our hero to kick their asre.5 MORE TO GO.

I m liking it.It's getting good chapter by chapter.I m desperately waiting to see our hero to kick their asre.5 MORE TO GO.

So she knows exactly what she has been doing, feels slight remorse, does not tell her husband , intends to do it again. I can only hope she gets killed in the crossfire , cheating whore.

He forgives the cheating piece of meat and keeps her. What trash!

really wretched. The BIG question is never answered. WHY did she lie BEFORE she fell under these evil perople spell" or control?

If would accepts sublimnial influences the website put her under their influence and programmed her to leave the note.

As she said in the story she believed she was going to receive useful orientation and then go to her friend's house but really the note left was a lie. I suspect that she thought that it was a white lie covering the fact that she was going to visit her friend. But she should have told her husband sooner and the friend should have been informed she was coming and then complaining about the fact that she never got there. Harry is therefore right in his commentary that really should have been reserved for the last chapter.

Furthermore I have been curious about why they did not have her call her husband and why he did not question her on that point and finally what she would have replied to him. Basically their cover story is lousy since any normal husband would have been uninformed about what was going on and torn into about the lack of telephone calls and more specific information. Can you imagine responding, "Dearest Matt, I do not have the slightest idea where I stayed"

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Personally, I do not understand how Harry and Anon could read a story of this length all the way to the end and evaluate at a zero level. That requires a real masochist tendency. The moment I smell a cuck in the corner I quit reading the story but I don't evaluate it because I do not know how to say that it is a good or bad cuck story.

The evaluation by Anon in Essex seems more realistic to me b

ecause he recognizes that the story got him involved. Me? I was reading an action thriller and considered the wimp factor as dieing under the weight of Hendy's opinion!

We appreciate the anon's summary of how the stupid wimp husband took the slut/whore back. Glad we did not invest the time to read the cluck work.

...from a sick mind.

Nice work! The detail is nice, even without a map of UK. And these guys are embarking upon exactly what they have been well-trained to do.

-- KK in Texas

This story is very good and holds my attention well, and this despite the fact that I do not completely understand or appreciate the military tactics being planned. The degree of precision in the military planning is fascinating. Another thing I seem unable to understand is why one women (and dominating/controlling her) is so important to the "Evil Group." I mean to say what is so important and so major in scope that would or could result from having one wife surrender totally to "this evil element"? Is there perhaps a significant financial gain to be made by the Evil group of which I, as a reader, does not yet comprehend? RAG

I find this story interesting and captivating, but I thought you Brits were better with English than we Yanks. Learn how to use who and whom, and take a gander at this: "The woman turned to face Beth, opening her legs to reveal her shaved pudenda." I'm sure it was a lovely sight, but don't you remember your Latin? How many cunts does she have?

You write very well, but your story is still too confusing with hypnotic suggestion sadomasochism, sci-fi etc that it is difficult to enjoy.

the Ct. Yankee

This story should be placed somewhere else, lots of thriller and detective stuff and almost no issues for Literotica as regarding sex

I have to give up, the short chapters are all running together with other stories I'm in the middle of reading. When this story is all finished and posted, I'll go back to the beginning and read the story. It's a shame, because this whole story could have been posted in two chapters and posted in two days. Thanks, and I'll pick back up on the story in a couple of weeks.....Rich

I give up, it's not worth trying to follow any longer. Bullshit and excuses. She's responsible for her actions, she had to start somewhere. Hubby should cut his losses and dump this stupid cunt.

You have absolutely no understanding of erotica. Pls go somewhere else, and stop wasting our time.

Fun read. looking forward to the rest. Good thing you put em out so fast.

to the psychos, so that the guys can go on playing war and detectives...

Wife's narrative of S/M and the mandatory drug and control routines were a collection of boring cliché’s.

The interaction between the spouses was mundane and shallow where it should have been the center of the story.

Clearly, what sits at the center here is playing detectives/warriors and super man -the wife and the relations? They are unimportant.

Great stuff. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks for this very entertaining story. On to Ch. 5.

Thanks for the offering.

Very much enjoying the story. The detail is well thought out and seems like you have experience related to the action. Can't wait to finish the read.

I'm getting a little anxious for the confrontation. Still trading...

too many short segments. please give us more to read in one sitting. the stop, go, stop, go is annoying and we have a long way to go. the artificial breaks just make it worse.

Complete trash and waste of time.

This writer must be a freaking retard to write something so stupid pathetic nonsense like this lame story.

Brainless stupid cuck tale!

1* for this crap.

Good story, I'm into it now and will slog on until the end. I do find it hard to believe she could be so taken in by a web site.

Getting nearer to the attack

5/5

Umm it is rape pure and simple. She didn't ask for any of this. The commenters who throw out the word "cuck" so easily either didn't read the story or have no clue what the word means. Whether you agree with the author's assertion that a video file could put Beth into a trance and key her to call the number, that is a matter of opinion. People can be brainwashed just usually takes way more effort. But once she agrees to.meet, finds out that more people are involved and end up tied on a couch, unaware how she got there since drugged, then forced to watch sex acts and whatever mental conditioning with more drugs, well that is all sexual assault.and rape. Period. If as a reader you continue claim that well it is all her fault and she is a cheating slut and the husband a cuck, despite her having no desire or intention to be in that horrid situation for several days, degraded and raped, and when not hypnotized, she rejected the caller until he gave her the trigger word, not to mention the husband is not taking it lying down at all and had hired a commando squad of former SAS to take out the perpetrators, well then those readers should take a long hard look in the mirror and ask themselves why they are even reading these stories, but that is a wrong minded and hideous interpretation of the story.