All Comments on 'Convention Weekend with Mom Pt. 04 - Finale'

Realistic and very well written. Gave it a 5.

Loved it, so realistic and well written. Thank you for a lovely ending too.

Very erotic from start to finish. A story that could have happened as it was written.

Enjoyed the whole story, Nice work

What a great job. I'll be reading more of your work.

Loved the journey and sorry it's over although it was a terrific read. Saved it to read again. Thank you.

A masterful work.

Great story. The flow between chapters was excellent. Can't wait to read another from you.

Love the tender and loving story.

An enjoyable read

Great job, I really enjoyed it.

This was a great story and the chapters flowed together well. The only criticism I have is you mention her wearing stockings often but never describe their color. I personally have a stocking / pantyhose fetish and would have liked more description of her hosiery and heels. Did she wear strappy sandals, stilettos, chunky heel, sling backs, etc.

My mother was and still is gorgeous, years ago I tried to seduce her other than a sexy kiss that was it .

I would love to have had what your story has in it .

O Well NEVER MIND your story is fantastic it just makes me sad I could not have what your story is about .

One sad guy

👍 👍!

Very touching. toward the end there, when he starts to regret that their opportunities are scarce, even getting married to another, i thought you had them just drifting away. Oh, no! Then came that apartment and her divorce and their love bloomed anew and all was right in the world, except: even though they are now both seasoned lovers, he can't seem to last just that much longer to cum with her or after her, always hoping he doesn't wilt before she finishes. There exists techniques that aren't hard to learn that remedy that, no delay creams or Viagra necessary. But, nevertheless, the love they have for each other shines through. And that makes this a love story, and a tender one at that.

One thing i think would make this better: with her divorce money and their pooled salaries, they buy a cottage together, maybe get a couple of dogs, a garden they can putter around in. You know- a place they can call there own, living out their years together. A two bedroom apartment just doesn't seem enough for the enormity of their love. And a cat, too. I guess they'll need a cat...