All Comments on 'Converging Destinies Ch. 01'

Another amazing start to a series. You have a knack for this kind of thing. Can't wait for part 2!

with the interaction between the living and those in their dreams. Can't wait for the next chapter.

One other comment though. A few times, a sentence will read as though it was written as a story outline and then changes back to story teller.

Again, looking forward to the next chapter.

Just because spell check says it's spelt right doesn't mean it the right word. As soon as I got to this line it kinda spoilt what might have bean ( spell check says it's spelt right but is it the right word) a good story.

"Please....this way Mister Laroux." The nurse said after regaining her composer."

See what I mean ?

Micheal... would be pronounced something like Mish-ee-al. Do you mean Michael?

Well, after a round of editing myself and a friend doing it....we still missed the Michael thing. I cannot believe we missed it lol. Thank you for pointing it out, i will fix it in all future installments.