by bicuriwhat
I love the build up of this story and the chemistry of the character! Great writing can't wait for more!
Your writing is absolutely spectacular! The proofreading was excellent (I didn't pick up on anything) and your writing flows really well. The characters are well-crafted too and quite likeable. Looking forward to future chapters. Noticed that some people were giving you grief for posting in the 'romance' section earlier. You'll probably find a much warmer welcome here. (: