by shakna
This was pretty hot. I hope there’s a wedding and I hope their family never shows up again.
I enjoyed that. There are not enough sister/sister stories here. Good ones are even harder to come by. The dialogue was very well done. The characters were unique and relatable. I thought the older sister's turn was a bit abrupt, but it's a small matter. Sophia was adorable throughout. Thank you for taking the time to write this. It put a smile on my face!
Okay...I have to be brutally honest with you. I have absolutely no understanding about why I had trouble getting into this story at the beginning. I was seriously forcing myself to keep reading up until Sophie and Chloe had their make-out session at the gym. I honestly was kicking myself because I always enjoy reading your crap even when it isn't my kink.
At first, I thought maybe it was Kimberly's running away and denying her feelings for her sister that was turning me off. But that couldn't be it because when I got to the point where I was enjoying the story, Kim was still firmly in denial. I still don't know what about the first two-thirds of this thing had me struggling.
That being said though, I absolutely loved the last one-third of it. Easily a five star story.
A lovely tale with two incredibly endearing characters. The writing was topnotch and the story was drawn out at just the right pace. Also...very hot! Thanks so much for the effort!